Country-City Boy

There was something about men when they did that casual slouch. Stomach curved in, hips slid out just a little that made her want to straddle and ride that. It didn’t hurt that this guy had a vague farmer’s tan and aviators sitting crooked on top of his buzzed brown hair. He was just enough city with a dash of country.


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  1. Gibble96 says:

    I really like this description. I simultaneously learn about the narrator/writer and the person/character in question based on the feelings and sentiments interlaced into the description.


    1. Thank you for taking the time to comment, sorry that it took me so long to respond. I have been surprised and pleased by the many positive responses to my Subway pieces. I thought they would be the least popular, but there is something about watching people and sharing observations that is a shared human experience. I am very glad that you enjoyed this piece and hope that you find the rest in the series equally intriguing.


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